2012年11月5日月曜日

Garlic's power


In Japan, everyone believes garlic is very good for health. Since past, garlic has been used several dishes. Especially, garlic soup is thought as best food for when you get cold. Japanese think garlic makes us powerful and healthy. Recently, garlic use for supplement or energy drink.

I think it’s true. According to my research, garlic has power for defending fatigue and making stamina. Moreover, it defends poor circulation and is good for sleeplessness. It has been proved garlic’s good effect. On the other hand, it has still been searched how good for cold. I was surprised that people knew garlic is good before it was proved.
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  1. Unknown2012年11月6日 17:25

    Hi Tomoyo,

    My parents always say that garlic and onion are healthy. If we travel to other country, we eat onion of the same country that we travel to it. It keeps disease away. So if you ask me, garlic is useful to health people.

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  2. Unknown2012年11月7日 11:09

    Hi To~~~moyo
    I also like garlic to. If you take this with sausage, you will fell amazing taste....

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  3. Unknown2012年11月7日 11:10

    Hi Tomoyo
    I think garlic is a kind of health food. My greadmother makes garlic every year. But I am not very like garlic.

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  4. Ethan ELI2012年11月7日 13:37

    Hello, Tomoyo. This is Ethan.
    Definitely, I think garlic is a good food for our health. And in China, we always use it in the cook. And the food will be very delicious with it. Lol.
    That's all. Thank you!

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  5. Unknown2012年11月7日 14:43

    Hi Tomoyo
    Absolutely. I also think it has power. Moreover, my grandmother said same thing too.

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  6. 匿名2012年11月7日 15:51

    Hi,Tomoyo! I'm Chika!

    That's true! My mother teach me it.
    By the way, sometime I hate it, because it makes breathe smell too bad.

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  7. Unknown2012年11月7日 18:46

    Hi Tomoyo,

    I agree with you Tomoyo.When i cook I use it in my cook.


    Rway Alhkeem

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  8. Josh Rosenberger2012年12月1日 5:57

    Hi Tomoyo,

    It is really interesting that people just knew garlic was good for them even before it was scientifically proven. Is there a garlic energy drink? I've never heard of it before! I try to eat garlic everyday. I can't imagine cooking without it!

    Here are some grammar errors to look at:

    1. Since past-->Since a long time ago OR For many years
    2. Passive
    a. garlic use-->garlic is used...
    b. has been proved garlic’s good effect. -->Garlic's good effects have been proven...

    Your grade for this assignment is 4/4.

    Thanks for sharing.

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